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This As Well Is Fleeting

Trapped in a lie
And I can't break free
Old emotions
Situations chaining me

Caught up in a web of lies
Too despondent
Crying out
Can't get by

And I feel... but don't feel
All your words are ringing
What was said... but not said
This as well is fleeting

Sweet and bitter
Memories
Old and new
But made to please

A word or two with little thought
Can break or make
Burn cold or hot

And I feel... but don't feel
All your words are ringing
What was said... but not said
This as well is fleeting

And I feel... but don't feel
This as well is fleeting....

Author notes

I've been having trouble writing recently. Too scared to express what I've really been feeling... and too confused. SO this is what I have. It is written as a song, so tell me what you think. =)
Written August 10th, 2005

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