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Eight days

There's a gentle southwestern slope
And a tourniquet, soft with longing
Two seas of time, flanked by waves of perfect dark
And divinity chiseled into living marble.

There's a pensive distraction
And the slightest flicker of a glance, which makes it worthwhile
Fragility is a bitter thing
(Need, desire, worship).

And the seas turn ninety degrees
Bringing all this back into perspective
A rush of warm blood, he's illuminated again
The adoration ossifies, building a less fragile feeling.

Reciprocated need reaches this way
And finally wholeness settles in
As a sound like fine crystal fills the corner
Perfect accompaniment to the lavender expectation.

Author notes

This will only ever make sense to me, so don't even think about trying to figure it out.
Written August 10th, 2005

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  • So-Alone
    August 22, 2005
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    hey this was good! gr8t job on it!
    ~~~nicki