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It Makes You Want To Dance

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It makes you want to dance
and go barefoot in the sand
thoughts of it makes you smile
walking together hand in hand

Just looking into his dark eyes
touching your finger to his lips
His soft touch upon your shoulder
as you sense his fingertips

It makes you grin from ear to ear
when his jokes aren't even funny
it's in that tender good night kiss
makes a cloudy day seem sunny

It makes you want to sing a song
to take walks along the beach
watch the beauty of the setting sun
wish for dreams far out of reach

It has even made grown men cry
make weaklings out of the strong
beware for anything is possible
when your true love comes along

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Written August 10th, 2005

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  • monkeysee72
    August 12, 2005
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    WOW AWSOME

    This is so true... I think Ken and I hit everyone of these feelings, and you know what? He's worth it!

  • Ladybug
    August 11, 2005
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    yes love does make all these things possible and you know when you know....
    that is for certain dear
    Tamara
  • Linda Sue silver member
    August 11, 2005
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    Hi Sis! Really nice! I love your poems about love. I see you used the picture from Bob's email. Wasn't that great? I put it in my favorites folder. I see you have yet another trophy...which poem? Love, Linny
    Edited on Aug 11, 6:49 because ''.

  • agalford7053
    August 11, 2005
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    Mum,
    THIS IS AMAZING! I laughed cause it was so cute and awesome! I liked this one alot. I enjoyed it. I wonder if that is what true love feels like?? Cause if so I want it. Well actually I already want to dance in the streets...but...shh..thats just me
    lol
    love ya
    God Bless
    ~Ashwey~

  • Donjo1030
    August 11, 2005
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    excellent

    Beautiful Sandy!!!
    you have written wonderful poem on finding true love. As always your poem flows really nice and a pleasure to read. Good luck in this contest. BRAVO!!!!

  • August 10, 2005
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    Very sweet Sandy! I especially like the line about laughing even when it's not funny. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!
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