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Angry Soul

Yelling
Screaming
Raging out of control
Casting blame about
Never stopping once
To look in the mirror
You are no better than me
Unhappy
Unless I am crying
Beyond the breaking point
On the verge of a breakdown
Holding back tears of pain
Hiding myself in the shadows
Walking on eggshells
Careful not to upset you
Not to anger you
My heart cannot take the abuse
Nor the constant lashes of verbal disstress
Not once do you stop
Never looking in the mirror
Seeing your reflection
Knowing you are no better than me
We do things differently
Because we are different
Yet we are no better than the rest
On my knees I weep
Begging for this to end
Each scream
Each yell
Sets forth another crack
Stretching out over my heart of glass
Ready to shatter any moment
Shards dangling within
Nearly piercing the soul of my being
Destroying the woman
I was
I am
And that I could be
My hearts bleeds uncontrolably
Aching and crying for relief
From the torturing words
Of an angry soul
Refusing to take the blame
Of his own dispaire and hatred
Of the world around him

Author notes

"rot in hell the SQA"
option UNO
Written August 10th, 2005

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  • tarnishedheart
    November 26, 2005
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    wow I could feel the anger and the sadness in this, I really could, very good job, I liked it alot!


  • Celticmoon
    November 1, 2005
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    Yes, Andy this was very much a write from my reality. One I choose to forget since I ended that reality 3 years ago.


  • Andy Stephenson
    November 1, 2005
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    This seems like a bleak poem for all concerned. I hope it was not a reality write. Anyway, you seem cheerful today.

  • tooshabella
    August 13, 2005
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    this is so sad and i am so sorry you have had to endure this, but you are so strong for being able to cope with this... well done.. a great write. well done xxx


  • Crystal Ellens
    August 10, 2005
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    I am so sorry you have to go through this,I know what you are going though I go through it to Every word in here sounds like my relationship but I just cant seem to write it the way I would like it to turn out but any way excellent job on the write you take care and best of luck to you


  • pantera1985
    August 10, 2005
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    amazing

    Oh this is so sad and so beautiful! You captured the emotions and images so well. Good job keep it up!

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