Your sound is so enlightening
When I sway from side to side
That laugh of yours most frightening
But when I hear the riffs I glide
Along the street
In my house
Wherever I may be, you will always be with me
You think you've heard it all?
I beg to differ
For if you've not heard the best band ever
You mine as well be dead
They came back this year
but only for times so Meir
I felt a chill run up my spine
When I saw you in public, that one last time
To others you may mean nothing
but for me, you are my everything
Hippies, Punks, and stoners alike
Will rise their hands in utter delight
You make us feel wanted
but mostly
I feel your presence when I am SO high
and I just thought you outta know
Pink Floyd's legend will never die!
Author notes
The beginning is slow, but then I think it gets better closer to the end!
Written August 10th, 2005
A contest entry
- For those about to Rock... by Mick Lane.
325 points, ended August 15, 2005, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice rhythym vix, i really like it. i didnt know what and you were talking about at first-i didnt even consider the background! anyways, im not so big on the band but its great youre so passionate about them. its kinda the way i feel about the used or sum41(
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xoxoxoxo paige -
Oooo.. I love Floyd! Rock on, and Yes, This was awesome.. I'm going to enter a poem I just finished about Morrison. I think I'll enter it tomorrow, or later tonight. Shower time.
Awesome write,
Floyd rocks
PEACE -
very cool. i love that album. glad to see a freshwrite for my contest, especially one about the almighty Floyd. (I almost shit my pants at Live8.) just amazing. anyawy, great write. i really liked the
"Hippies, Punks, and stoners alike" part, as I have been labeled as all of those, though I am not any of them, so that really clicked with me. great write overall. best of luck in the contest, and thanks for entering. take care, and keep writing.
-Mick-
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