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The Proposal

"I know that there will be fights.
I know that you will one day hate me, and there will be a day that I hate you just the same.
I know that we will look back and ask ourselves why we got into this mess.
I can't promise you a lifetime of happiness, because it won't always be like that,
and I can't promise you all the riches in the world because I don't have it.
But I can promise you that there will be good times and bad ones as well,
great memories, but bad ones also,
happiness, and anger.
But even above all of this, I promise you that I will never leave your side.
I will never go astray, because even though I know that it will not be an easy ride,
it will all be worth it because you are the one for me.
You are the only thing that keeps me going.
You are my rock, my crutch, my stability.
You are - my everything, and I will love you
until forever..."

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Written August 10th, 2005

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  • Night-lord
    December 12, 2005
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    great

    I agree with my friend vamps a great poem i enjoyed it


  • vampira1665 silver member
    August 12, 2005
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    Very well done. And no marriage is never ever something you can understand. All you can expect is the unexpected.

    Hugs and bites, Lady Raven