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One more thought....

I lie alone when no else is sleeping,
I look into the stars that shine like fire,
Which burns into my soul.
The city goes to bed,
And the thoughts mumble through my head.

your eyes will cradle me into your mind,
Your love will subject me to your everlasting soul,
Which draws me into your sweet breath.
The passion you show me,
lets me know the person i want to be.

this magical feeling sending sensations down my spine,
I look into your deep blue pools,
wishing they would grasp me to be yours.
But there you sit, happy and content,
with her in your arms...heaven sent

Your smooth hair lingers in the beaming light,
Your plump lips beckon me to kiss you,
Your soft skin brushes my arm.
Snap out of this trance.
It's just a light romance.

I want you to hold me in a loving embrace,
to taste the true you,
to understand what she has.
Why do i want what i can't have.
Ugly, insensitive, half-mad?

I love you with all the feeling i can possible bear,
I'm shredding my heart into a thousand pieces,
Aching over my broken heart.
The scars will heal and my mind will open,
But my heart belongs to you and will never be apart.

But on my own i dream of you lingering kisses,
Your beautiful smile radiating the room.
Pretending your beside me.
I love you more than love is possible,
Just why did the angels.....take you instead of me????

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Written August 10th, 2005

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  • spoilt angel
    August 11, 2005
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    gr8 rite as always hun! sad tho! sniff sniff xxx


  • sky black
    August 11, 2005
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    awww huni this very cute, although u didnt follow dazz's rules, tut tut. lol. anyway nice write and i hope this isnt true *worried look* but anyway nice job best of luck in the contest, l8az love ya sky xxx