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the killer of the heart

She creeps into the shadow of friendship
Her every wish is to hurt your soul
So you can be left feeling worthless
But in reality she envy's you
Her insecurities eat her alive

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Written August 10th, 2005

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  • Blooming Poet
    January 21, 2008

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    Sounds like one insecure issue to me. We all have insecurites, I know. And we all have friends that back stab us it happens.


  • Perhaps
    July 26, 2006
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    Much better. After ripping you apart for your other.. post... thing... that wasn't a poem I'm glad to discover you are actually a decent poet! Good, actually... that last line was a killer- good job.

  • love hate cliche
    August 14, 2005
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    Powerful words Heath.I just started writing in here again.Kudos for you!