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looking for

looking for....

a guy that has unique traits
like a dorky way he dances
or his love for crossword puzzle tactics
even a clumsy way of being romantic
it wouldn't hurt for him to be a little sensitive
one of those guys that does simple things
like brings me breakfast in bed
maybe even sits on the couch and gently rubs my head
when he dances with me he pulls me in close so i know he wont ever let go
a guy that sees my fantasies and makes them a reality
because love makes life without love you aren't living life






.....when i was typing this i found out some really depressing information, so i have one thing to say to all the ladies out there, be careful when you say i love you. that gives the guy power to control you. so trust him with that power before you give it to him.

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Written August 10th, 2005

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  • baybee-bug21
    September 20, 2005
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    this poem is really kool good luck on finding him


  • BiteMeWitUrFear
    August 26, 2005
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    Omg! Gurl i love you poem. it's written very beauitful.Just wanted to let you know, that you are on my favorites and i BOOKMARKED you poem. Amazing!!!!!! I love it


  • CountryLullaby
    August 25, 2005
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    really? well we might have to do somthing about that sometime. k? hope to talk to you soon.

    ~*CASEY*~


  • OcIceman
    August 25, 2005
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    im that guy


  • Dances With Trees
    August 12, 2005
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    AWW! This poem was really good! I usually don't like love poems at all...but this one roped me in! That is a feat if you ask my friends! But I think that you are very smart for posting this poem! It was very inspirational!!


  • CountryLullaby
    August 12, 2005
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    thank you so much stac!!! and the line is supposed to say "like a dorky way he dances" sorry about that one!lol thankx again!!

    ~*CASEY*~


  • CountryLullaby
    August 12, 2005
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    thank you so much for your comment! and that line is supposed to say "like a dorky way he dances" sorry about that one. lol and i think that you should stick around this site!!! thankx for your wonderful comment!!!

    ~*CASEY*~


  • CountryLullaby
    August 12, 2005
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    its supposed to be "like a dorky way he dances" lol srry about that. glad you liked it though!!!

    ~*CASEY*~


  • DarlingStac
    August 11, 2005
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    this is good.. i thought it was really good... xoxo stac
    ps... and im agreeing with the tohers about that line.. lol..


  • forty-one
    August 10, 2005
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    Casey, I love this! I'm agreeing with Britt about the same line. Also, what you had to say to the ladies out there... very true! I hope they know this, really!

    I'm trying to hang around here... still reluctant to post, but it's difficult knowing I'll disappoint some really wonderful people such as yourself.
    Nice piece!
    Prince

  • ChelseaNicole
    August 10, 2005
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    aww casey i loved this poem it was really good i really liked it alot
    i love ya
    chelsmonster

  • sweetheart4rain
    August 10, 2005
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    im sorry babe..nice write..but this part confussed me.."like a dorky was he dances"..luv ya lots
    -Britt

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