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The most terrible feeling in the world...

i can only imagine what it must be like to be in a hospital bed paralyzed. not being able to smile, looking at your loved ones and not being able to give them a smile,you know, to let them know and give them hope that everything will be OK. it must be the most terrible feeling in the world...just lying there, in that plain room, and not being able to move whatsoever, and just rotting away. it must be the worst feeling  of all, knowing you wouldn't be able to laugh, to cry, to scream when u are happy, or scream when you are in pain. i can only imagine what it must be like to depend on machines for survival. i mean, what would happen if there ever is a blackout, and all the power goes out, those last thoughts running thru your head, thoughts like " oh my god, I'm gonna die" or " this is it for me now" i wonder what goes through peoples minds, when they're about to die, i wonder what's the last thing they see or think of... could it be that the last thing they see is the ones they love?or do they just see their life flash before their eyes?

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hi everybody. well i know what you are thinking \
Written August 9th, 2005

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    August 13, 2005
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    Wow! This IS depressing! Very intense.
    Is this true? If so, I'm very sorry to hear this.
    Thanks for sharing it.
    Brian


  • My Inner Soul
    August 12, 2005
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    AWESOME...AWESOME...AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ...SPEECHLESS!!!


  • sky black
    August 10, 2005
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    o wow, depressing stuff huni, what can i say? not a lot...of my goodness..hope you are ok! anyway, speak to me if you want dont worry, nice thoughts (well not really but you know what i mean) and a good way of looking at things. anyway take care, l8z sky xxxx


  • amandalynn0485
    August 9, 2005
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    great

    hay this poem is really sad. i have had the same thoughts a time or two. exspecially when my aunt was in a car accident that paralizied her from the waist down, and when my grandpa was on life support laying there in that hospital bed. keep up the great writing.