If suicide is not the answer,
Then what is the answer?
I know you didn’t mean to make me cry.
I hope you didn’t mean to make me cry.
You love me one minute.
You hate me the next.
You act like you hate me the next.
Well I hate you.
You disappoint me.
I think I hate you.
If suicide is not the answer,
Then why is my life supposed to end like this?
I know I don’t want to do this anymore.
I’m sure I can’t do this anymore.
I knew long ago
That I’d never be happy again.
Well it’s finished.
Oblivion.
I’ll be part of your past
Part of the past.
Is suicide is not the answer,
Then perhaps you’re asking the wrong question.
I know I have never made you cry.
I wish you would take some blame.
There is nothing wrong
Inside my brain.
I’m not just depressed.
Just pressed down
By you.
Death will bring us closer.
If suicide was the answer
Then why am I still here?
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Written August 9th, 2005
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amazing works
wonderfull work, i enjoyed it but like many have said suiccide is not the answer. ask someone. if you have no one there to ask then ask one of us here we are all willing to give a little advice to keep someone out of harms way. God put you on this planet for a reason and he will take you when your time comes and that will hapen not at your hands but at his. so keep writing it is awsome. -
brillient job
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oo ooo! very good poem! I love it! i love how you get the uncertainty across, the second guessing yourself and and the repitition. great write keep penning!
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this is so so so sad. I wanted to cry. And no, suicide is NOT the answer, it never was, it never will be. You're here for a reason considering you're still alive. Never consider suicide...never...
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Aaaw wow, very sad, but I enjoyed this to it's fullest, excellent job
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