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A.d.d.

You can forget your keys
and lose your place
For absentmindedness
takes up much space

But when there's much confusion
and gloom hangs above
Take a peaceful breath
and never forget Your Love

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I haven't written for so long, because sometimes there's so much to say...But this one's personal, about my Love who has A.D.D., and a friendly reminder for him to keep his head up...
Written August 9th, 2005

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  • Lara
    February 10, 2006
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    Hi sweetie! Yea, I find it really hard to write poetry if I'm not suffering, haha! But I want to write more...it really takes alot of energy, that I may not have right now. I gotta save it to take care of myself. I Hope you find your inspiration soon as well. Love you!

  • Prodigy
    February 8, 2006
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    I think 'tis so cute! It's a nice thing that you've written for your loved one, to give him strength and support. Comes to show that not everything in this world is as bad as it seems, and it makes me feel hopeful and warm inside to see you wrote this for him. I wish I could find such a deep love, minus the issues I have to go through now >.> Be well ^_^


  • Dienush
    October 22, 2005
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    This is very interesting and a nice thought. I enjoyed it because it's so unique and short. I liked the first stanza more than the second, but overall it was good to read it.


  • August 9, 2005
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    A nice reminder for him I would say. Sometimes we forget random things..its the things we always remember that matter the most, though