I was howling at the moon
one sinful night, when this
vision of beauty walked
the earth...
her hair as though the wolf
her fangs as though the lion
accented in blood
she had enormous yellow eyes
that pierced your every being
her tail drag the ground
lifeless she looked
a thing of rare delight
she dragged a corpse
of a child...
that was capture
that moonlit night
I went to feast my eyes
she hissed and swatted
a spunk I desire
I tore at her clothing
shedding them to the ground
she was naked before me
in her gray silken fur
I touch her oh so savagely
she howled in delight
now we hunt and
ravage the earth together
a marriage of werewolves
Eternity!
till...
death by man does us apart
A contest entry
- Morbid Minds and Romantics! by Thetwistedvagabond.
302 points, ended August 11, 2005, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Darken Us Up with Your Comedic Genius and Romantic Attitude by So Strange.
1000 points, ended September 7, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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I enjoyed this because the imagery was good, the flow was also good and the wording was well done. Also, the writing was a good piece of work.
Good luck in my contest! -
wow. i didnt see that ending coming. great write. i think this is very good. good luck in the contest.
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You have wowed me again Kkatie and your imagery is fantastic in this piece. your story unfolded extremely well.. and the choice of werewolves was exciting... once again I must tell you how highly I admire your poem and how well you have conveyed to the read the feelings of the subject. am very glad I read this one
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Good write! werwolves arent usualy my taste but this was very well written! I love the ending, the tale was enclosed beautifully! good luck in the contest and nice piece
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great write
hello katie...this is very well done...you have given the reader great imagery...and you choice in word use was excellent...I love the last line...great ending...good luck in the contest...a poet friend..larry -
her hair as though the wolf
her fangs as though the lion
accented in blood
she had enormous yellow eyes
that pierced your every being
her tail drag the ground
lifeless she looked
a thing of rare delight
What a beautiful image...keep writing -
katie you are such a great writer! have you ever thought about publishing your works? well its time to consider it if you havent. thanx for sharing kat!
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This was very good and chilling and creative. You have written this well and the darkness of it added to it. Great job on this nice piece. thank you for sharing it.
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AAAAWOOOOOOOOO!!!
Aw man! The curse of lycanthropy! Very exciting stuff! Enjoy it while the moon is high. Because those nights last only too short of a time! -
This was a very interesting poem and a very interesting concept. I like how you have told this story about werewolfs so often you hear vampire poetry, but this is very good and I enjoyed reading it. I like the flow of it and the build up of darkness and passion till you get to the end finale. I really loved this.
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