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ThanksTo All Our Military

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U.S.Air Force

Off into the wild blue yonder
making the skies safe and sound
flying sorties with precision strikes
we have the best air force around

U.S. Navy

Gunners man the turrets at sea
sailors help keep the enemy at bay
battleships transport men and arms
camouflaged in battleship gray

U.S. Army

The best trained army in the world
regular and reservists fight side by side
hometown heroes sacrifice their all
fighting together with American pride

U.S. Marines

The Marines are always the first to arrive
when it gets tough they give their all
preparing the way for those who follow
answering the sound of freedom's call

U.S. Coast Guard

Protecting the shorelines of our nation
deterring  drugs and modern piracy
terrorist threats against  our homeland
these men and women protect the sea

The National Guard

They are our wife, mother or our daughter
they can be our husband, father or our son
Sacrificing their careers and families
Called to serve they will get the job done    




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Written August 9th, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    August 10, 2005
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    WONDERFUL CONTEST

    Thank you for the nice comment. I do appreciate it. Take care and God Bless you. Sandy
  • amz my heart
    August 10, 2005
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    What a nice tibuite to all the men and women of the service..thank you xoxo

  • Arsenic-
    August 10, 2005
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    Yes, I did enjoy that...thank's for the pointer. Very nicely done...you warm my heart with such good words. ARSENIC-

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 10, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you so much Joanne for the wonderful comment. It is always appreciated. God Bless you. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 10, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Ah, Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. Our wonderful men and women in our military don't get the support they need from home. It makes me sad and mad. Your comment and support is greatly appreciated by them and me. God Bless you, Sandy .

  • August 9, 2005
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    Support of the troops regardless of the reason is necessary to help keep them alive and show America's strength. Nice tribute Sandy - thanks for sharing!

  • thelordreigns gold member
    August 9, 2005
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    Oh Sandy this is so wonderful - a fitting tribute to our men and women who are risking their lives so we can be safe here. There is not enough credit given to our soldiers. Thank you for writing this - joanne

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 9, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Ah dear Ashley, I know how much you miss you brother already. I know how you feel. I will say a prayer and hopes these next 10 months go by quickly. Thank you for the lovely comment. You are such a dear sweet AP daughter. God Bless you. Sandy, Mum

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 9, 2005
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    Thank you for your comment. I do think about these fine men and women who are sent in harms way. I don't always agree when and why they are sent. They don't have a choice. They are obeying orders. I will always support them till everyone is home. That is the least we can do. Talking negative does not boost their morale. I'm sure most would rather be home with their family. Thank you again for commenting. Take care Sandy

  • agalford7053
    August 9, 2005
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    Mum,
    This was really good but it made me miss Michael even more . I know he's only been gone like 2 hours.. but I still miss him so much. I told him I wanted to squish him and put him in my pocket. And when they asked where Michael was I'd tell them he was in the bathroom .. and then sneak out and take him home with me.

    God Bless
    love ya~
    ~Ashley~

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 9, 2005
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    Thank you for the nice comment. I may not always agree with the powers that be but I support our troops 150% Anytime anywhere. God Bless and take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 9, 2005
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    I appreciate your opinion. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 9, 2005
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    I appreciate you taking the time to comment. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 9, 2005
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    Thank you for the comment. I appreciate you taking the time. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 9, 2005
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    Thank you for the wonderful comment; You are so right about adding them seperate . My grandson is in the Army National Guard. So I shall go back and add a verse. God Bless you and thanks again for the lovely comment. Sandy
  • Praise his name
    August 9, 2005
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    Wow Sandy I have to say I love this poem seeing that Andys brother is being sent back to Iraq wonderful write here and wonderful tribute.
    BE blessed
    Mary

  • Donjo1030
    August 9, 2005
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    excellent

    Wonderful write Sandy!!!
    What a tribute to our armed forces. I am a veteran of Viet Nam and I thank you for this wonderful write. This one should be published some where so our military personnel can read this.
    This not being your usual style of write you have done a beautiful job in this message. Praise God!!!!BRAVO!!!
  • sethISneat
    August 9, 2005
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    U.S. Army

    The best trained army in the world
    regular and reservists fight side by side
    hometown heroes sacrifice their all
    fighting together with American pride


    i liked this alot- even beyond the reason within 6 months i'll be joining up to go serve- but keep on writing- loving it !
  • poeticgenius44
    August 9, 2005
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    GREAT TRIBUTE, TO ALL THOSE WHO PROTECT AMERICA, GREAT WRITE!
    can you comment on my poems?

  • August 9, 2005
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    I feel sadness in my heart reading such veneration to those armed for War... Have even thought about those man and woman that are sent to foreign soil are as scared as the people living in such hostile enviroment??? Well I guess not! Sorry I had to speak up my mind for sadness is in my heart.

  • August 9, 2005
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    I think this is wonderful!! support the troops and may we make the world free(a dream of course, but a nice one)!!!
  • NeferMaatNetjer silver member
    August 9, 2005
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    reading the comments, i see that both anti-war people and veterans are in agreement about Iraq. i hate to say it, but i agree with them, too. the Bush administration has turned this country into a global school-yard bully, flaunting it's military muscle with recklass abandon. our noble military should not be used to slake the greed of big-money corperations.

    even so, i still liked your poem. it has heart. thanks
  • NeferMaatNetjer silver member
    August 9, 2005
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    nice B-24, by the way
  • NeferMaatNetjer silver member
    August 9, 2005
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    we veterans thank you very much for this fantastic poem!

  • Malabu
    August 9, 2005
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    Now if we can only put our politicians on the front line Id be a happier american. I fought for this country and put my life on the line..All for the glory of some politicians egotistical greed. War accomplishes nothing. just death and a repeat of history. bring back the draft.....and make it an honor to have our politicians serve our country with dignity.

  • ceXee
    August 9, 2005
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    awwww so sweet to write a contribute a piece to our military. my husband is in the AF and even though he hasnt been deployed yet he still protects our country. and i agree with everyone on how wonderful this is, thanx!

  • August 9, 2005
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    very nicely put together.....

  • silvershadow430
    August 9, 2005
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    This is wonderful!! Great job!! Bless you for think about them =]

    ~Kat

  • SeptemberFaith
    August 9, 2005
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    I really liked this, but you forgot the National Guard.

    I have a friend that is in the Air Force and one that is in the Navy and I know how important their jobs are!!!

    Thank you for this poem,

    Criss

  • xSallyxDollx
    August 9, 2005
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    Sandy you did a wonderful job on this - the american soldiers who could read this would be very proud of you.

  • Annessia
    August 9, 2005
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    Great write My cousins are all in the army, and my parents and uncles and grandparents are all veterins. Great job!

  • ICULookn
    August 9, 2005
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    Wow ! what a thoughtout piece that you have certainly taken much time to construct, making sure to give points on much. This is such a lovely blue which depicts the wording in your piece.

    Blessings

    Be well to all those in search of fredom
    ICUlookn

  • Spilledblue
    August 9, 2005
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    I'm a wife of military man...Thanks for the tribute. It means so much that others see the honor in serving our country. Thanks a bunch!

  • Redstormy gold member
    August 9, 2005
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    Honorable tribute... sigh... these days they need all the support they can get, it's refreshing to read this. Awesome descriptive write.

    Red
  • noel lovett
    August 9, 2005
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    !

  • SimpleSarcasm
    August 9, 2005
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    Thank you, thank you, thank you. I am a disabled Air Force Vet and I absolutely love this poem.

    I salute you.

    ~Dee
  • Molly Densmore silver member
    August 9, 2005
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    This was wonderful how it broke each branch of the service up for writing something about each one. Great work on this, I have so much respect for our military and the sacrafices they make for us at home. This was really well written and each stanza flowed nicely. I truly appreciate the wonderful words you wrote about our soldiers. Great job and thank you for sharing this.

  • Samplette gold member
    August 9, 2005
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    Thanks a million and then some. Amen to your loving and passionate heart. You are always thinking of others. Beautiful way to honor our magnificent military!! Bravo girl!!
    Sam
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