Poetry's intrinsic beauty
Opulence for one and all
Embodied with so many styles
Transfigured words penned as such
Ravishing the reader with many thoughts
Yearning to touch each and every soul
Joyce Le Lievre (sunny day)
POETRY
Poetry's intrinsic beauty
Opulence for one and all
Embodied with so many styles
Transfigured words penned as such
Ravishing the reader with many thoughts
Yearning to touch each and every soul
Joyce Le Lievre (sunny day)
Poetry's intrinsic beauty
Opulence for one and all
Embodied with so many styles
Transfigured words penned as such
Ravishing the reader with many thoughts
Yearning to touch each and every soul
Joyce Le Lievre (sunny day)
Author notes
After reading a few acrostics that were done by e e hal, I had to try one of my own to see if I could make other readers see what I feel. Thank you for the inspiration!!!
Written August 9th, 2005
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wonderful
this is truly amazing! this is spectacular! you did such a great job on this! keep on writing poet. God bless you
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Deb, Thank you again for coming back and not only reading this one once more, another applause as well. That is so kind of you. This was my very first acrostic and I figured what better word to use than "POETRY" itself. I wanted others to know what it meant to me and hope that they shared at least some of the same sentiments. You are as wonderful as your words for me. Love and God bless, Joyce
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wonderful
this is great! i like this...an inspiration for me to try it soon. thank you for sharing this! God bless you
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Debilynn, I feel you will love acrostics and I want to thank you for both the applause and your lovely words. I also want to thank you for adding me to your favorites, that is an honor. I forgot to tell you. I have a sister Debbie Lynn.
Love and God bless, Joyce 
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Vic, Thank you for the words of praise. Wow, even hugs and kisses,
You definitely have the same sense of humor as my young friend Nav, 
that's cool. 
She is a hoot. You have a good evening my little new found friend. 
Joyce
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4 stars ****
oh... to be honest.. once i read a poem from Nolazydaizy ... may be it was titled Paradoxical ( i am not sure.. its just that i remember it cos it was nice write... and i dont remember it cos i read it like many months before ) .... i just tell you about that poem cos may be that poem was the best i have read about poetry itself.. no doubt yours is good.. its just that your poem reminded me of that one..
coming to your work... its pretty full of facts.... i think you are deep into these acrostics world... ... and i think one just impressed me
nice write.. good work.. thanks for sharing
hugs and kisses
gives choco
(you dont have to read nolazydaizy's poem...
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take cares and have a nice time my dear friend........ just keep it up.......... your humble little friend............ ........... .............. .............. - vic ( who else??? )
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This was my first attempt. No rhyming at all but my feelings for poetry. I thought it was a good way to start out with them.
Thanks again for the comments and applause. Joyce
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I see your very good at acrostics, you do such a good job at them. You have much talent. Keep the great writes and good luck in your contest. Have a blessed day.
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Again I thank you for the wonderful comment and applause you have given me. I visited your author page and I noticed the comment about less sleep...lol. I am having that same problem already and I've only been here a few weeks...hehehe. It is addictive as you said. Thanks again and since you are now on my favorites list I'm sure I'll be reading a lot more of your work. Joyce
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Great
Super, so you do them too, I love them, challenging, keep it up, you will only get better and you are already good! Super job on this as well! -
Thank you for the lovely comment and applause. It's funny but this one did come easy after reading a couple of acrostics.
I figured what better way to show how I feel about poetry. I had fun with this one and want to try more, I'll have to think up a good one. Wishing you a great day. Joyce
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Very clever, I am useless at acrostic poem, but you have made this look both easy and sophisticated. well done.
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Thank you so much for the applause and the wonderful comment.
I loved yours as well, they were dedications and that comes from the heart. The best!!! Now I'm going to bite on something I saw on your home page. How did you think of this nickname, you really piqued my curiosity with that. Will I get an answer is the big question? LOL Thank you again. Joyce
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This is beautiful, joyce! And, I think you've done a much better job with this form than I have. This is much more 'poetic' than mine are. I think I just put together a sentence or two and called it good. This, i can tell, took much more thought!
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You truly inspire with your words!!!
Pam, I thank you so much for the wonderful comment. You always have great words of praise for all and that itself inspires one to keep writing. A big for you. Thank you again.
Joyce
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it.
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Thank you for the read it is greatly appreciated. If you look at each letter of poetry and make a reference to the word itself it shows how you feel about it. The sentences don't have to flow into one another necessarily. My first try at this type of work.
Have a great day!
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THANK YOU!!!
Thank you for such a wonderful comment here. I tried to convey my feelings for poetry and let others know that whatever style they 'E'mbody, it is all beautiful in my eyes. KT, you really know how to make a person feel good about themself. Bless you from the bottom of my heart. Joyce
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Thank you for the wonderful comment. Being my first attempt at an acrostic I thought doing one on the word poetry itself would be appropriate. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope others will as well. Joyce (sunny day)
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Joyce, Now I see clearly tou most uniqe style for the pen and this is just a giving of your blessed talent. I expecially love the way you paintedthis particular imagery here"'R'avishing the reader with many thoughts.
'Y'earning to touch each and every soul." Excellent Acrostic!
KT
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Excellent
Oh this is a lovely acrostic. You have done very well here. I LOVE it. Bravo! ~Pam
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very good acrostic on poetry.
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I'm not up on acrostics but I like the brevity of your piece. When it comes to poems I like brief and concise verses. It didn't read as smooth as I thought it should because each line was a full sentence and didn't flow into the next. I'm not sure if that is what you suppose to do in acrostics or not, but it's just my observation.
I enjoyed the read.
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awesome..it depicted poetry wonderfully
such timeless beauty
'P'oetry's intrinsic beauty.
'O'pulence for one and all.
'E'mbodied with so many styles.
'T'ransfigured words penned as such.
'R'avishing the reader with many thoughts.
'Y'earning to touch each and every soul
It is so very very true..and it becomes more true every time i read it
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