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Thank You

Thank You

Thank you for all you have done for me,
thank you for giving me love,
thank you for being my fantasy
angel from heaven above.

© Jim T. Henriksen
August 9th, 2005

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A little love-poem I wrote for my wife, as a valentine card...
Written August 9th, 2005

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  • Starhiker
    August 29, 2005
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    Isn't Valentine's Day nice? It's the day we can be as mushy as we like, and nobody will disrespect us for it.


  • sunny day
    August 27, 2005
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    So Beautiful!!!

    Jim, What a beautiful Valentine's Day card for your wife. It was straight from your heart to hers. You expressed your love with so few words however, they were words that will leave an everlasting impression on her heart. This warmed my heart.
    Thank you for sharing with all of us. Joyce


  • Starhiker
    August 25, 2005
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    Thanks for the comment, Candy Kiss...


  • August 24, 2005
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    Short and very sweet. liked it alot.
    Candy Kiss


  • Starhiker
    August 23, 2005
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    Thanks! That's the nicest comment I've got from you.


  • Fearless Leader
    August 23, 2005
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    Simple, yet sincere. I like it.

  • Starhiker
    August 19, 2005
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    There is really no way to describe true love properly, it's like trying to explain how many zeros it is in infinity. Poetry is merely a feeble attempt to do just that, the impossible, to describe what cannot be described...

  • sunny day
    August 18, 2005
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    So Beautiful!!!

    True love is sublime, coming straight from the heart. You summed it up beautifully in this tribute to your wife. I found my soulmate and have been married over two decades now. He is my world, my other half, my reason for living. Thank you for sharing this with all of us at AP. Joyce


  • Starhiker
    August 16, 2005
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    Thanks, Albus2... heartwarming words!


  • Raazi
    August 16, 2005
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    Good job!

    All your poems are so encouraging, so inspiring. This one is no different. Your poems make a difference. That's what makes them stand out. It makes YOU stand out. Good work!

  • Starhiker
    August 16, 2005
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    Where could you've read this before? I've not posted this one anywhere else... Could be someone has used the same imagery, or maybe even someone used some of the same words? To my best knowledge, this is a creation of my own mind, and not stolen from anywhere. But thanks for the rest of the comment...


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    August 16, 2005
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    I feel I have read your work elsewhere and have left a comment. I normally go on exploring various writers and if they come back, then I keep in touch. I had loved what I had read from you.

    This is a very beautiful tribute of love to your wife. Well done and Thank you for sharing it here.

    God bless,
    Lencio

  • Starhiker
    August 11, 2005
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    Thanks Aandolin, I appreciate your critiques alot. Not all poetry from the same poet can be the same quality, you know. Some, like this, is written in bliss...

  • Aandolin
    August 9, 2005
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    i like, not as much as your other stuff, but i still like, same old same old ive said in the last 2 or 3 ive critqued by you today (you may have noticed im crtiquing all the poems on your biogpahy page) flow imagrey and word choice, flow good,imagery could be better, word choice again could be better, anyway, nice poem, happy writing, aandolin

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