Rebirth
Oh, angel of Love's Pure Touch!
You come to me on wistful wings
Silent, but ever strong...
Stronger than suspicions learned
From bitter youthful years.
Your serene eyes enchant me
Like sunset's glowing promise
Of nights warmed by sweet caress...
Warmer than the stone cold heart
That built dark walls around me.
Oh, seraph of Love's Pure Touch!
Like a pristine woodland brook
You wash away my angry tears...
Memories of a stolen childhood
Cleansed forever from my mind.
Your soft voice comforts me
Like a zephyr whispering lullabies
Through fragrant evening fields...
And in your soothing touch I find
The joyous blush of endless spring!
Author notes
For T. - The loveliest Divine flower Down Under!
Written August 9th, 2005
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exceptional
This is a beautiful poem. The form is easy to follow and it flows so well I had to read it twice to be technical about it. Your images were strong and mystical, but most importantly heartfelt. You have a gift that most poets on this site don't.
" Silent, but ever strong...
Stronger than suspicions learned
From bitter youthful years."
^wow, I love that part.
There's a whole feeling built around this poem; perhaps unique to it that the reader undeniably gets. A kind of youthful abandon with all of love's emotion and letdown, along with a sort of emerging sun from the horizon, as you put.
The whole last stanza was genius and it finished the poem in good form. I hope you don't mind if I give this one a print
and my last applause for the day; well deserved!
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Never do I fail to feel your words rush over me, and swepp me away! It is the passion! That inner surge which is driven ever so majestically from inside and onto your grand little parchment, by means of a radiating quill, dear Silentium! YOur lines and phrases, images and meaning, are ever beautiful!
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A poem like the dawn arriving after a long dark night. Your strength of faith and delight in Gods gifts warms my heart with a promise of a life, washed clean of doubt and troubles.
Inspired by great love and peace, you create a flowering of beauty for us to share. Thank you
Love Tara
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What an inspring pen! You have certianly taken much for the mind to think on in your piece. The words are painted with such smoothness and the flow is claming! and as you stated"you sfote voice comforts me" that is such a true line for this poem!
Well done
Blessings
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BREATHLESS
You just lifted my spirits this morning. Thats not an easy job to do. Your words are just simply beautiful and the flow elegant. Breathless comes to mind most of all. Blessed Be -
Exquisite
You took my breath away with your words. A true poem from the gods.
'Oh, seraph of Love's Pure Touch!
Like a pristine woodland brook
You wash away my angry tears...
Memories of a stolen childhood
Cleansed forever from my mind.'
Healing us all with your beautiful, beautiful thoughts.
Thank you so much dearest poet, you words will help many this morning. Love, Jane
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