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Would Anyone Miss Me?

Sometimes I Wonder
If I Stop Breathing
Would Anyone Miss Me?
Would I Cross A Single Thought
In My Dads Mind?
Will My Best Friend Cry?
Would My Secret Crush
Finally Know When Its To Late?
Will My Ex Miss My Crys?
Sometimes I Want To Grab
The Knife To Find Out
Missing Answers
Would Anyone Miss Me?
      <3 Mia

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Written August 8th, 2005

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  • iamfromabove
    August 9, 2005
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    I have low spots and think this sometimes but then I think of all those I know both in person and on here and yes they would.
    And why wouldnt we miss such a charming vivacious wonder like you? Smiling yet?
    You have written your feelings really well great write
    Mia


  • SapphireStars
    August 9, 2005
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    Sometimes I do wonder, but I never dwell on the subject too long. Yes, the answer would be yes. Death always leaves a ripple in the water that'll soon turn into a tsunami.


  • Hidden Fortress
    August 9, 2005
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    I feel the exact same way... I feel the pain.. i totally understand....