Somewhere... inside my
Head I see you waiting for me
By your window with the
Lights turned low.
But I don’t show…
It’s not the first time
You’ve been hurt by me,
But maybe- maybe this time
You will see through me
It’s finally time you got on with your life,
Time to set the record straight
Time to bite the bullet,
Let yourself be free-
And forget about me!!
…forget about me!!
You know you have to let go
Sooner or later this will all hit home.
You’ll need someplace to fall-
A loving embrace,
Like the one I tore away from you!
What the fuck are you gonna do?!
What are you gonna do…?
It’s finally time you got on with your life,
Time to set the record straight
Time to bite the bullet,
Let yourself be free-
And forget about me!!
…forget about me…
Author notes
i wrote this in a few minutes- i guess a way of putting any underlying self-doubt down onto paper to actually confirm that it's there.
Written August 8th, 2005
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Poor Em. Anyway, this peice is exceedingly different from your others. but then again yours aren't often related. i like it tho.
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Ah you're FINALLY posting again. Now I'm curious.... who is this about?
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interesting, i would be curious to know where this came from, but i can kinda maybe guess if it had to do with a past relationships, but i really dont think you of all people would still be dwelling on the past so...yeah. lovely job, i really liked it, swell lyrics, and yeah...lovely job, i hope you are gonna start writing regularly again now, i have missed your APness. lol
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wow... it IS a really good poem... lyrics are awesome... great job on this one!
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well this is a really good poem. i'm not sure if you've changed the color or not. *shrugs* who knows??? anyways, this was really good. keep up the good work.
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This has to be beautiful when it is set to music. Really nice lyrics, Dude.
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what?! even with my brightness all the way down, i can still clearly see the words!! you guys are whacked! stupid people piss me off. what color should i change it to, then, huh?
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I would love to have commented on this however the color you have chosen made it impossible for me to read the poem - good idea to change it - I can't see it at all
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This is awesome... I love it... again i feel this reminds me much of my EX... I adore this poem...
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Lots of potential
This is an interesting song, although the rhythm is not obviously denoting a song. Your background/text choices made this difficult to read and may have detracted from your poem. I'm not sure why you noted guitar/piano riff because the poem itself should suggest music in our minds.
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absolutley beutiful blew me away greate job
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i cant read this and highlighting things hurt my eyes... mmm, "good job"?
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I really like this although i think the "what the fuck are you gonna do?!" kind of breaks up the feel of the lyrics. just a thought. either way i think it's good.
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