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Inner Desires

You're so unaware,
So innocently free.
You have no idea
What it is you do to me
I'd love to inform you,
But I fear that wont change much
All I really want
is your smile, your warmth, your gentle touch.

Author notes

It used to mean something to someone once a long time ago.
Written August 8th, 2005

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  • RockBandPromoter
    July 25, 2008
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    nice poem

    sweet...
    i like lovey dovey poems...
    write more feller
    i add u to my favs.

  • newsiesfreak212
    August 8, 2005
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    aww i love this its so cute!! haha u FINALLY wrote, made me VERY happy darlin! seems like yous wantin a girl tehe wonder who it is...i liked the rhyming, nice touch! luv ya babe MWAH <33 kris