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Love

I don't know why I thought
you were worth my while

All life is, is white lies
and a smile

I see you all out there
having your fun
You'll end up just like me,
when it's all done.

When you find yourself
in the dungeon,
try not to touch my stuff
I've left a map to get out
gone livin, no chance for love.

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Written August 8th, 2005

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