Your look so persisting
I quiver at the sight
Always loving
Then
A girlfriend, who is not me
is in the picture
once again
Both fighting for perfection
Your affection
Are you even worth it
Broken life
Broken heart
What more can you break?
My spirit, I think not
I will always live on
Your touch will always remain in my mind
But your soul will be elsewhere
With her
I feel wrong, but my emotions have overcome thee
Talking might solve everything
I can't, not yet
Just one more innocent kiss
Then
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Sorry if it's bad. It's kind of my drunkin' rampage!
Written August 8th, 2005
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A girlfriend, who is not me
i love that line-dunno why. i also really like the ending. you have really strong endings. i love the way its slightly old english.
xoxoox paigee -
Sorry, what are you talking about? I'm slightly confuzed! WHo is this again!? oh, it's rachel! nvm
Edited on Aug 08, 8:24 p.m. because ''. -
and by you're I mean your...
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Well done darling. Oh yes, the drunkin' rampages. That's what I'm talking about. Anywho, I'm glad you've joined us here at allpoetry. Can't wait to read more of you're stuff. Don't forget to comment on mine too! Love from,
Ray
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