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Limerick Contest

A limerick contest was held.
By a lass who lived near the veld.
She said you have time.
to write a short rhyme.
But it mustn't be badly spelled.

Author notes

Hooray a competition organiser who didn't ask for anything in my author's box.
Written August 8th, 2005

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  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    August 17, 2005
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    Thanks for the comment. It helped that the organiser was from South Africa which gave me the key rhyme held-veld-spelled.
    Jim S

  • ceXee
    August 17, 2005
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    hehe wow this is an excellent limerick, i havent gotten around to writing one yet but its coming soon, its going to my friend who is having a baby in a month, a perfect new nursery rhyme for her son. anyways back to yours, i loved its humor too hehe. good luck jim!

  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    August 9, 2005
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    Thanks for your generous comment.
    Jim S

  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    August 9, 2005
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    Thanks for hosting the competition without the inspiration there would have been nothing here!
    Thanks for my little Gold Pot too.
    Jim S

  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    August 9, 2005
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    Thanks.
    Glad you liked it.
    Jim S
  • jeaneileen
    August 9, 2005
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    Congratulations on winning the gold!

  • silver bugs
    August 9, 2005
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    Lmao, this is awesome I love it..I'm laughing how amusing...Thanks for sharing and entering. Best of luck in my contest!
    Take care
    ~Lana

  • thelordreigns gold member
    August 8, 2005
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    Very cute and sweet!
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