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I need you
You didn't care
I never image a day
When you wouldn't be here
You mislead my love,
Betrayed my trust
Ripped apart
The dream of us
Broke my heart
And watched me cry
As I fell to the floor,
Empty inside.

Author notes

I know, still a lot of work to be done. But i'm just writing here and there.
Written August 8th, 2005

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