So I'll put on this smile
like a costume of lies.
You'll be fooled and know not
that this is my disguise.
You say you know when I'm hurt
but then you miss it in my eyes.
You must be occupied with something simple
like the stars or the skies.
All they do is twinkle.
You don't have to deal with their cries.
I guess you'll understand
when that young girl falls and dies.
Author notes
okay so it seems like the only time i write anymore is when im making something on photoshop and stuff just randomly comes...not relavent to anything at all. oh well. if you read it you should comment cause thats always cool 
Written August 8th, 2005
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words just can't explain, you're very talented keep it up!
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i love you karina.
and this is wonderful. just like you
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nice job karina. its beautiful...thats all i can say.
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yaay i love it but i love you more
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P.S. I loved the title
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I loved this piece.
its funny how people are supposed to know you so well... and cant even tell when youre upset.
wow anyway.. very relatable... I dont even know what to say. -
kewl poem, really liked it, i wrote a poem about a false face as well, called false smiles. good poem
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Wow. Very nice...I like the last two lines the best. I always try to end my poem with a huge 'bang' like you did. Do you have a deviant art account?
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