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Part Of Her

He said he'd always need her; she felt complete. She needed him too; they were like a part of the other's soul. They could understand each other; she could tell him anything.

He's drifting away from her and she doesn't know what to do. She's too far away to do anything. She promised she would help and be there, but he's rarely around anymore; she feels empty, numb.

He may kill himself; she isn't sure, but she takes it seriously, since she knows him so well. When he speaks of death, he means it. If she loses him, she dies.

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I just sit here and these songs and all of the other ones that remind me of him...I think I'm going partly numb and if I lose him, I think I'll die. He's part of my soul.
Written August 8th, 2005

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  • Seven Kinky
    August 11

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    Sad, sad write, hun. I assume this has resolved itself because it's a few years old. Sucks knowing your friends are hurting and you can't be there with them physically to help fix things. I went through a similar situation about a year ago.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    August 10, 2005
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    He came online today. Thank you for your kind words.

  • GauArrowny
    August 9, 2005
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    I'm sure he'll be back. He probably needs some time alone or something. I hope you don't worry too much and if you find out something does happen, I'll be here for you.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    August 9, 2005
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    Thank you...I hope things are alright with your friends.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    August 9, 2005
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    Thank you, again.

  • Eve Angel Lynn
    August 8, 2005
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    A brilliant write. It's so sad, short words and sentences full of emotion. I hope everything goes well. This actually reminds me of a few relationships I have with some friends I have right now. It just makes this all the more meaningful. This is no officially a favorite. Keep writing~

  • robert bolin
    August 8, 2005
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    This is sad when someone is trying so hard to do everything they
    Can to help the person hold on the soul fights for every minute
    It can to help save another friends life..brilliant rite..

  • AddixToo
    August 8, 2005
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    i'm so sorry

    HOW SAD. i hope tihngs get better with you and your friend if this really is happening in your life, something like this has happened to me and it came out pretty well, this would make a good story like full blown novella! but i shouldn't be happy about this, i'm really sorry but you worded it very beatifully, if you want, we can talk about it, and maybe i can help you out a little bit. i'm no professional phsyciatrist but i still want to know whats going on. i konw you don't know me but, message me and tell me how tihngs are going. because when i was going through this, i would have loved to talk to someone about it but i just didn't have anyone i trusted enough to talk about it. so i want you to know that i'm hear, and i'm not a forty year old pervert! so talk to me if you want!
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