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Cork Screw

Waiting for what appears to be eternity
Wondering when it'll be my turn
The experience is just beyond my grasp
I can feel it

So long have I awaited my turn
So long have I dreamt of my turn
When will it arrive?
Will it be as exciting as I'm told?

Finally I hear it
The voice
The one I have so longed to hear
Calling to me

Forward I move
Following the call
Anxiously awaiting my turn
Has it finally come?

YES!
Yes it's here
With great anticipation
Springing forth so willingly

With each passing moment
My intensity grows
My body begins to tremble
As a smile breaks free from my face

Oh how I've waited
How I've longed for this moment
And now it's time
It's my turn

Here I am
Arms of steel
Securing me from harm
Holding me tightly

Everyone looking on
Filled with lustfull anticipation
Gawking at what they see
Yet the cheer  as it begins

Moving slowly
Relaxing into it
Breathless
Taking it all in

The spectators roar
The climax building
Securely in these arms
I feel the butterflies inside

Rising more and more
Moving on top
A sudden gasp
As I come crashing down upon you


Oh the rush
So intense
Oh the adrenaline
So electrifying

Excited
Panting heavily
Gasping more
With each drop upon you

My entire body  
Shaking uncontrolably
My heart beating
Faster and faster

Spiraling around over and over
Never slowing down
The on lookers cheer on
Their screams faint against the trembling within my body

The tenstion building
More and more
Nearly at the end
Or is it really the end?

Endorphins rushing through me
Pulsating from every vessel
Forcefully  pushing my heart
My heart rate raises

It's spectacular
It's amazing
It's incredible
It's intense

My eyes closed
Not wanting it to end
The crowd yelling louder  
Nearly deafening

The final moments
Slow and savoring
Sweat dripping from my brow
Intesity like I've never felt

Slowly ending
The crowd hushes
Hearing the voice I forever longed to hear
Listening and following

My knees  weak
My body still shaking
Butterflies still a flutter within
Heart rate slowing

Arms releasing me
From their secure and craddling embrace
Smiling brightly
Walking away completely satisfied

Looking at the spectators
The wonderment upon their faces
Is so delightfully fullfilled within me
I had  my turn as they wait for theirs

Slowly walking away
Stopping just few feet away
Looking back in awe
Wondering why I hadn't done this sooner

Oh what a rushing ride
So wild
So free
So perfect





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Written August 8th, 2005

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