A line with no rhyme is a sublime crime and a waste of time.
Author notes
I am consistent
Written August 8th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- One Liners by fears of joy.
300 points, ended August 22, 2005, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thanks for your comment. I Try
Jim S -
You did it again, I feel you should win, if you don't it's a sin.
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Thanks for your comment (I think)!
Jim S -
The true art of a poet is to write in rhyme with skill, not string yards of words together
Having said that a badly rhyming poem is less palatable than a rotten peach.
Barb -
Thanks for your comment. Everyone has their own opinions on this but I was brought up to believe rhyme was a synonym for poetry.
Jim S -
They do say love thine enemy!
Jim S -
Thanks for the comment I enjoyed your rhymes.
Jim S -
Well you know the old saying.
To thine own self be true.
Ji S -
I'm not sure if there are a lot of people who will agree with this hmm... but maybe it would be a good test though let's all start making lines with rhymes
kinda poetic language 
Best wishes in the contest!
Leander -
mmm, rhyming is my worst enemy but it appears to be your friend. glad someone can master the concept of rhyming
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Oopsie, I entered a line that doesn't rhyme, such a crime, I'll have to do time. Funny, since my nature's sunny, and I can rhyme sweet as honey.
Your concept is great, and I have to state, if I'm not too late, I wish you good fate!
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You could not resist could you. Whatever you do you do it with a rhyme. Even with a one line you stand out. You did good here,
best wishes for the contest and have a blessed day.
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