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A Freedom

A freedom I wish all could have
A freedom with a price so high
the only reason i have it
is because others had to die

A freedom you choose to protect
A freedom that we often forget
we take for granted how much
this freedom really means to us

A freedom that gives us a chance
A freedom that lets us live
knowing our lives will go on
because others chose to give

Thank you for going to help
Thank you for helping others
Thank you from the hearts of
fathers, sisters, mothers and brothers

Author notes

"we support our troops" - yes its ok to use my poem
Written August 8th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • smileygurl
    August 10, 2005
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    Awesome poem! This so beats mine! It has a certain flow to it that makes it really good!

  • hoplessromantic
    August 8, 2005
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    Greta Job i really like this it is so very ture. Good luck in my contest

    ~*Kris*~