Beast In Beauty by eternalpoet at All poetry

Naked Face of nature
Is just so much to recognize
The beauty itself so profound
Truth we forget to realize

Lord-god’s concerned grace
Made us fall in her divinity
Fresh life, she lets us live
In her blessed vicinity

Convinced by a self-less thought
Tried to see nature’s other side
Never hidden from human race
Hated it till they live & died.

Behind the beauty of my angel
Lies the beast forever
What I took as her innocent act
Came out as her horrible endeavor

Vichitra Joshi (J.Vic)

Author notes

Its Important to realise that nature is not all just beauty.

this write state's the other side of nature which is very drastic...like earthquakes.. and heavy rainfall (grrr floods) which is usually hidden behind the beauty of nature

Option (3)
take cares

miss me

- vic
Written August 8th, 2005

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SeLfDeStRuCtIoN
June 11, 2006
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ahhh....
This is simply my fav. so far, sure you can guess why & don't worry I'm actually a very passive person.
Decemberslove
January 11, 2006
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i love this poem its very nice and i love the last paragraph keep it up your friend rosa aka beba
PolarbearApocalypse
October 12, 2005
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kick ass!!! hey we both are called vic. im victor lol..

this poem reminds me of one of my favorite songs.. beauty and the beast by nightwish. you really kick some in this one!! keep up the good work!!
eternalpoet
September 19, 2005
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blabbermouth .... well... u lucky cos u aint first to say it.. odawise.. ... i have got oda side which much more different than what you see now... andi wud have make u see it... ... : muahahahhaahhha :... ..
Ankeeta
September 17, 2005
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i never knew this blabber mouth can think so much ...nice though here vic and good effort too...I liked every line of this poem

keep going
ankita
jenelda
September 5, 2005
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W W Vic you are becoming an amazing poet my Little Chickadee, yes nature is not always what it seems, look at Hurricane Katrina, how much damage she has done. Well written Vic
Jenni
fae
September 4, 2005
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Ah Vic- you can write! And so well too. I love how you show us the other side of Nature. Very well written and enjoyable. I'll have to keep my eye on you cause you're wonky too
RubberDuckyDestiny
August 31, 2005
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great write. the flow was good and the concept was great too. good job and good luck in the contest. thanks for following the rules.
Firefly
Neha Sharma
August 31, 2005
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hello vic dear....
I must say you are much mature than you seem to be in your im's your thoughts are very deep...profound... they make me think... its tough though... not possible for every poet... you're a very thought provoking poet vic... all the best dear...
Neha
PureAmethyst
August 18, 2005
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wow, this is such an amazing write, and its so true, nature is not just pure beauty, wow, i love this great job, i would applause but i'm all out, wow.... xXxPurexXx AKA Natalie
DamnUnique
August 16, 2005
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woooooooowwwww.........such a great write,vic! i love the metaphors that you've used here....simply awesome...
indeed,nature IS beautiful but equally ugly too when in fury...
i love the personification that you did here and hey,the rhyme scheme is simply SPLENDID!!!
great job,vic....keep writing
August 16, 2005
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Amazing
Adorable poem that makes the reader take a pause and think. Very well written piece. A wonderful and amazing work.
adorable yeti
August 11, 2005
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hii... long time no see I'm falling over asleep over my keyboard at the moment.... soo will be bak later.... take care.
Tigerblood
August 11, 2005
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Love it Vic! Flows well

-Tiger
eternalpoet
August 10, 2005
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didnt make this for this contest.. its a prewrite in a contest
August 10, 2005
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hey remember me brittany well anyways great poem love it
p
August 10, 2005
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Cool..written so thoughtfully..And I loved the title..Good luck at the contest..and the rhyming was so natural..no beast behind this..lol..keep writing..
madhavmool
August 10, 2005
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Beast in Beauty by eternalpoet's poem a significance peace to the poet which usually percept in a natural scene or the event in the solitary place and the title more appropriate.
JM Kenyon
August 9, 2005
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You are right Vic, not all that is nature is beautiful, however, she is like an eternal queen with unsurpassed power and reign over her domain. She can be the fairest and all good grace or the worst of terrorists.

Terrific write with splendid rhymes, excellent wording and topic and best of all... GORGEOUS use of personification

Best wishes and s... ~genielassie~
-Mary-Duffy-
August 9, 2005
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truely talented
hey vic, absoulty brillant and so very true I loved the words you used and the ryme was wonderfull, you are a truely talented person I think all you work is perfect. keep on writing and I'll read every one.
I wrote two new poems let me know what you think! thanks you truely Mary
schadenfreude
August 9, 2005
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Great, like everything else!
wow... you really have a good point. I like it!!
Great poem.

Hate me never, Love me forever.
-DeathsBabyGirl
Anais Elaine
August 9, 2005
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Hello my dear friend
Wow this piece of poetry is great, very well written, good flow, makes the reader think of everything that goes on around us, the beautiful and the drastic. The breeze in the trees on a warm summer day, the stars that shine so bright at night, and also the floods, the earth quakes which take away people's lives and leave others shattered. Thank you for making me think of all the beautiful, and not so beautiful things that nature gives us every second of every day.
Good luck in the contest.
Take care my friend because I care
Elaine
diwata
August 8, 2005
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PERFECT 10!!!
the words here were woven so well that the poem came out to be very smooth and full of wonderful ideas(though a little horrible and terrifying)... and very realistic. Great write!!! (clap,clap,clap)
I do hope you win the contest.
Im Spiffy
August 8, 2005
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hehe Great!
Hi-ya this was great!
♥Kiki♥
Mickie27
August 8, 2005
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I liked this write this was very deep and I like how you have expressed your thoughts in this. It is a very honest write. You have done well with this and I enjoyed reading it.
nolonger
August 8, 2005
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This is a magnificently beautifully written poem,It is also full of truth, I like all the thought and such that you have put into this write, And you express yourself so nicely. Aweome write as always
hugs and kisses
Always
~ vini ~
Sweet Angel16
August 8, 2005
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hey nice write Vic its brill! n true!
barefoot contessa
August 8, 2005
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Viccy, it was beautiful. So this is what came to mind? I loved it except for your pity party in the Author's comment. lol Sissy, proud. Thanks for entering, and good luck. lol
Ghost of a Siren
August 8, 2005
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This is beautiful, well done.