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Silver Tears
Blissful Pain
Death Falls
Like A Blazing Rain

The Devil’s Prayer
Killing Me Softly
Exhaling My Life
Breathing Hardly

Tormented heart
Broken Apart
No Tomorrow
Absolute Sorrow

Ultimate Suicide
Concludes.
As Eyes Fears
It’s Burning Tears.

- Vichitra Joshi (J.VIC)

Author notes

From a point of view of a person, who repents on his decision to commint suicide.. but now its too late to do anything.

Well.. i dont really know about everyone else.. but my life has been quite smooth till now, so i personally think that suicide is an avoidable issue from the society.

Few suicidal cases i have always respected are the one by Hitler ... and Chandra Shekhar Azaad (Indian Freedom Fighter)

you all must be knowing hitler.. lemme tell you something about Chandra Shekhar Azaad

He had vowed that he would never get into the hands of britishers ( never get cought), but once he got surrounded by britishers all around him, he had one last bullet so he killed himself and kept his words (promise) .... and no its not a typical indian mythical story.. its a fact

sorry.. it wasnt connected with the poem.. but hope you read it

take cares

miss me

- Vic
Shadowed Fox
Written August 8th, 2005

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SeLfDeStRuCtIoN
June 26, 2006
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i likes, i likes & thanks for the extra info
DarkChildsKiss
December 18, 2005
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Wow. I came across this poem and title caught my eye. So I read it. And I love it! It's so deep, full of pain and sorrow. Great Write!
forever loving jay
Unique-Rebel85
November 25, 2005
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wow .. very powerful piece here .. I loved it .. you wrote it so well for someone now knowing personaly about suicide .. great write .. and thank you so much for entering ... good luck

Amber
-Mary-Duffy-
October 25, 2005
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great
Great poem Vic, I liked it alot, altough I am sure I've read it before, well good luck in my contest.

Mary
ChaingangAngel
September 30, 2005
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Awesome
I loved this its so much emotion......Good Job I love your writing..
Much Love Desarae
starsage
September 25, 2005
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Yes...Yes...this was very emotional. Thank you for not giving me a rose background, and something that I had to delete. And thank you for not writing me a story...I'm so sick of deleting those...and thank you for giving me EMOTION. I'm so sick of people writing about roses...
eternalpoet
September 19, 2005
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keep wondering.. ...
Ankeeta
September 17, 2005
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wheee ..this was fantastic again.i wonder how did I miss you have a look at these poems ....you author comments makes a lot of sense
thanks for sharing this vic

keep going
ankita
September 11, 2005
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THIS IS UNIQUE AND WONDERFUL IN YOUR CREATIVE EXPOSURE OF SUICIDE.
Flow is well done in the verses and expressed emotions the ending was perfect for this poem I enjoyed reading your work.
amateurpoetess
September 11, 2005
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It is quite dark, and its haunting. For someone be on the edge, to comtemplate such a decision to take one's own life, and to follow that through. It just makes me shiver. I can't imagine the dark thoughts or depth of pain that takes someone there. You've shown some of the kind of despair that must be felt, well done. Its painful to think of others in this kind of torment. You show an image most can't attempt to understand.
sunny day
September 10, 2005
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Excellent work!!!
A look at suicide from someone else's perspective. I really like this piece Vic. You penned it brilliantly and the flow was excellent. The rhyming was great and you show that you have a lot of talent in that pen of yours. Keep up the wonderful work my young friend. I had a couple of friends who commited suicide when I was younger, you don't really get over it. I still say what a waste. They really had so much to live for but their doubt and self pity sent them down a dark road from which they never returned. Excellent work and thank you for sharing with us. Joyce
misticalDreamwalker
September 10, 2005
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omg vic this piece was absolutely just most beautiful i have ever read you are like my new favorite besides me i never have seen somoneso great as u and i welll keep up the good work and keep writeing and i love your author page can u help me with mine? well id like to chat later ok bye hugs n kisses
eternalpoet
August 30, 2005
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its today that i read the verdict

5 Stars *** (ha!) ...lolhahahah alls on the floor:

vic to laurianne
Edited on Aug 30, 4:40 p.m. because 'tee hee'.
shebleedsbeauty
August 21, 2005
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OMG, vic this is a VERY emotional, touching piece with clever rhyming
xoxmia
lies-n-pain
August 18, 2005
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wow this is an excellent poem! i have yet to read a better one on this website so far. Very nice write, with lots of emotions!good job!
-CAiT
babysara
August 11, 2005
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Great
i like it tight and true !you good keep it up LOTS OF HUGS AND KISSIS TO YOU FROM ME !!!!

forever and always
Sara
August 11, 2005
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hey great poem i love it
brittany
Capital
August 11, 2005
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5***** (Ha!)
I think the fact that you don't have a direct point of contact to the poem makes it an even more exceptional write, very insightful and is a beautifully structuered and worded piece!
Great subtle imagery, really enjoyed this poem!
p
August 10, 2005
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Nice..and good way to tell people about Indian freedom fighters..lots of people read you actually..lol..well anyway Suicide for stupid love reasons and other stuff is certainly avoidable
diwata
August 8, 2005
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PERFECT 10!!!
wow...I never thought you would amaze me so much in just one day...I read in one of your author's comments before that you are not good in writing so-called "dark" poems...you're wrong I tell you...This thing you have here is perfect!Thank you for making my day......*smooch*
Im Spiffy
August 8, 2005
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oi i just membered one of brittany's poem has this title... and its a tiny bit similar
♥Kiki♥
Im Spiffy
August 8, 2005
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Hi-ya again!
this was wonderful! it was really good
great write!
♥Kiki♥
Technicolor Kay
August 8, 2005
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love your poem but you need to put ~*shadowed dreamer*~ in your author box so i know you read the rules
DamnUnique
August 8, 2005
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an uber amazing poem,vic n it's soooooooooooooo much connected to my mood right now......yeah,i was feelin REAL low.....have felt it zillions of times before too but i loooooooooove my friends who've helped me out
i liked the simplicity of this poem and the stark, straightforward style in which it's written....and as for your author's notes,i feel bad about hitler's suicide cuz it'd have been better had he been caught by the allies...he deserved real torture here on earth too for his crimes...(any pro-nazis here,if you're offended,i don't care.....get lost! )
chandra shekhar azad's suicide was indeed great and he was a true patriot,no doubt
well done,vic....keep writing

Edited on Aug 08, 1:33 p.m. because ''.
ICaughtFire
August 8, 2005
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AHHH VICCCCC.
This is amazing! I -LOVE- it. The ending just...swept me away and made me want to cry.
Tormented heart
Broken Apart
No Tomorrow
Absolute Sorrow
My favorite part. And I've thought about suicide before but I was always too scared. But I wasn't too scared to cut myself BUt. Anyhow. This poem is so beautiful and I love it
-julia-
-Mary-Duffy-
August 8, 2005
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talented
hey vic, well done this is brillant I know what you mean, Ive try to cut myself in the past thow I dont do it anymore, I had a bad childhood and It was something I did to excape the hurt and pain it just seam to make me feel better, I would never do it again it something I did and I'm over it now It just feels like a bad nightmear now at least I can wake up. I think you poem great vic I loved the words you use, youve a great mind.
Molly Densmore
August 8, 2005
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This was qutie deep and so very sad, except for the fact the suicide did not take place. You have expressed your emotions well and wrote the accordinally. Great job on this and thank you for sharing it.
complicatedgirl
August 8, 2005
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5
vic i like this poem,great write..
take care
your lost friend
~~~~~faith~~~~~ i know (who else)..lol
beebee2003
August 8, 2005
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the meaning is hard to find, but when you do. woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow!!!! its very meaningful, and it touched me very deeply, great job and keep the good writing up....-beth
Belle
August 8, 2005
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I don't know who you are referring to...but the poem in itself is very good. Thanks for sharing it, darling.
~Brandi~
xoxoxo
eternalpoet
August 8, 2005
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what do you think you did right now?? .. you see.. this is cheating.. lol.... to My Lord... you are awesome..
hot babe30
August 8, 2005
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this is an awesome poem! you are so good at writing poetry!
i like the passion in this and its meaning

keep it up
much luv,
aby
SimpleSarcasm
August 8, 2005
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Considering I haven't a clue as to who you are refering I can't say yeah or nay. I'm not keen on martyrdom (too many people now a days are thinking they're martyrs for some misguided cause) either which is what sounds like he did.
This is an interesting read.

~Dee
Sweet Angel16
August 8, 2005
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wow Vic this is a brill poem! uve written it so well!n err abt suicide......well...err...tried it once but u just cnt do such a thing coz all these other thoughts come in ur head of ur family...so i only ended up cuttin meself...n u kno im proud i didnt commit suicide ah well ur poems true! gd luk in da contest!
eternalpoet
August 8, 2005
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errrrrr.. in case.. i like him cos of his mind.. and political strength... not when you take in his greed to get aryans on the top of the world... ... so dont take me all wrong
eternalpoet
August 8, 2005
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actually... i love his suicide.. cos i love him .. lol.. i am not able to accept he was a coward... thats bad... (may be) ... but .... nothing .. thanks (i got no points to say why i respect his suicide .. by the way.. who knows if he too must have vowed not to get captured and die.. or such thing.. .. doesnt matter.. .. what matters is the first two lines in the author's comment

thank you
JM Kenyon
August 8, 2005
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Vic, your poem is terrific, every word is perfectly placed my friend. So many times I have been to the very edge of hope and teetered on the edge... but I take pride in that I have not fallen to complete despair and need not regret either the scars (both mental and physical) of wanting to die or forfeiting the joys of life by causing my own death. My motto is that there is always hope if you look close enough.

As for your author notes, there are instances when pride becomes more valuable than life. Some retain their integrity and some have simply done the deeds of a coward and escape humiliation the same way, by cowardice (that is my opinion on Adolf Hitler).

Anyway, a great write my friend, I do not think any could have penned this better.

s and best wishes...

~genie~