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I have

ever miss some one so much
that it hurts your heart to think about them?
and when you go and try to talk to them
they aren't there,
and the only thing that goes through your mind
is thoughts of suicide?

ever love some so much
that you would give your life just to see them smile?
were every night you cry your self to sleep,
only because no matter how much you try to show them
that the are the only thing that keeps you alive,
they want to die?

ever think about some one so much,
that no matter what is said,
and no matter who loves you,
they are the only thing you care about?
and when you tell them you love them,
they reject it as if it was a lie?


Ever love some one,
that has forgotten how to love?

...I have...

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Written August 8th, 2005

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  • Oh Dolly
    March 30, 2006
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    I dont know who its to, i dont care who its to. All i know is that i love you with all my damn heart and i miss you. THis poem is like taking words out of my own head when im thinking about oyu.. shain i need you babe.. god i love you


  • shouri13
    February 16, 2006
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    yeah i definately know what your talking about on this one. havent talked in a LONG time lol.


  • beautifulbrat
    October 23, 2005
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    this is something i can relate to. great write. hope to see some new stuff from you soon.


  • CrazyWalnut09
    August 10, 2005
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    rejection is hell... yet another one that I can relate to...


  • Forevers Eve9
    August 9, 2005
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    good

    Yeah I have too maybe for one to many people. Good poem keep writing.

  • mumma
    August 9, 2005
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    mmm i have too..this is a really nice poem keep it up

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