Dew-dripped bud-ling of darkest mire,
You are my only heart's desire.
Do not turn your cheek to my sweet plea...
At least turn once and look at me!
Your eyes so sparkle with crimson shame
Let not your thoughts reflect this blame.
Gifts of wonder I leave with you;
I send you chocolates--roses too.
Yet still you refuse me the barest grin
And I ask what was your sin...
Angel's daemon of blackest night,
Still you are my love, my light.
I pray you give the barest sigh;
Just a note to tell me why.
Your lips part slightly and I smile,
For only this, 'twas worth my while.
In fields of springtime and lands of green,
There I'll lead you to worlds unseen.
And still you deny me my one true wish
I turn back, more ideas to fish.
Devil's daughter of purest heart,
I pledge my all; here from the start.
Here with this: my final gift...
My life's own blood, to you I lift.
I ask you take me, heart and soul,
Or relieve me of this lover's toll.
At last, I have you, my sweet desire,
Your lips graze softly like churning fire.
Now I at last give up the fight
And turn forever unto My Light.
Author notes
Romancy enough for you?
Written August 8th, 2005
A contest entry
- Romance Or Seduce My Persona [Contest] by Rose Dark Thorn.
500 points, ended April 15, 2006, 18 entries
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Thanx
Actually, T, I'm a girl. And Rose? Well, she's my most favoritely wonderful posting partner. I remember you, by the by, I just haven't had much time recently. After all, I just got back from vacation. *sigh* Lots of things to catch up on AGAIN. I'm glad, however, you liked this write. 
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Remember me, or am I lost to the shadows so s
Nice poem my freind. I'm not sure if you remember me or not, but I haven't been on lately. Your poem was very nicely put together and had a nice flow to it. I could also see the emotion behind it, seeing as we(the dark of heart) have to understand eachother right. I can still read you, and we have something else in common too, we are both in love with girls named Rose(given I think mines falling apart) but this is not the time or place to discuss it. Good write my freind, keep it up... -
Well, I couldn't exactly kill this suitor, could I? You know I wouldn't have the heart.
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Thanx
Stubborn? The writer gave you an ultimatum, Rose.
Practically, kill me now or love me sort of thing. Oh yes, as for the whole stick thing...it won't work, you know.
As for the whole "light" thing...what would you expect from a love-struck suitor? -
Hehe, this was a pretty poem. Nice rhyming. Sweet enough for a lovely Rose I think. I wish you best of luck in her contest.
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Oh, this was sweet. It was cute too. I wonder why I tend to attract such stubborn people. I'm not that worth while am I? 
I don't understand it. I do nothing to try to attract this attention, and now I have so many on my heels, I'm not sure what I'll do. Do I have to get a stick to beath them off or something?
Thank you for writing this for me. The rhyming is lovely, though not perfect. Still a sweet thought and a lovely piece of writing, however, though I never thought I was ever any sort of light before...
Thanks again and good luck.
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