Tonight as I sit here my thoughts
Have drifted to the love that
I feel deep within my heart.
No one touches me as you do,
Kisses so tender yet sensual.
I long to be wrapped in your arms
Never to leave the comfort of them,
Give me your heart to hold my dear.
Only you can bring out the love that I
Feel deep within this heart of mine.
Your illustrious eyes gleam for me
Only, they're the colour of the sky.
Undeniably we share a special love.
Author notes
Thinking Of You
Written August 8th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- acrostic poems by Kuro5612.
300 points, ended August 22, 2005, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thank you Kuro for honouring me with the Gold Trophy, it was a wonderful surprise.
Jenn
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WOW! I don't know where to begin. This is a good right. I love it. I can somewhat relate to this. Keep up the good work and good luck in my contest.
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This was just perfect wording for this
Acrostic
I love these lines
Only you can bring out the love that I
Feel deep within this heart of mine.
bravo and best of luck in the contest
hugz
Tears
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4 Stars ****
awwwww
Is it for me? is it for me? is it for me? is it for me?
say yes
you rule when it comes to acrostics .... my butterfly queen just rules the romantic world with her significant writes i loved this write... ... missed nothing except my name (as usuall 
) nice write... good work.. thanks for sharing my dear Pluff Pluff Spongy Doll
hugs and kisses
this time for you 
gives choco
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.......... just keep it up........... your humble little friend.........
.......... ........... ............ - vic ( who else ??? )
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Beautiful acrostic Jen..so romantic..you write beautiful tender words my dear..im sure he will be happy to read this romantic poem..great job..good luck
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NA NA NA NA NA NA NA, that's for me to know
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I'm an owl, "who, who, who?"
Hey, I know this feeling, and have you gotten to the point yet where people get sick of you writing about him? They did me. lol
I wish you the best who ever he is...is he on AP? Do I know him, is he bigger than a breadbasket, is he older or younger? lol
I'm done now.
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This is really sweet, it gave me goose bumps. Love is truly a beautiful magically thing. Great write!!!!! Til
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Thank you my friend for your wonderful comment, I will look forward to reading more of your beautiful writes.
Jennifer
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Such a sensual, passionate poem filled with both the beauty of your heart and the love it contains. Who ever inspired you to write this heart felt poetic masterpiece is a very special and lucky person. To say this poem is great would be an understatment. The imagery you created in this poem is nothing short of amazing. It is so very captivating that I could feel so many loving emotions flow throughout your poem. I look forwards to reading more in the future.
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I told you before I is not telling you, I love teasing you
I ain't talking
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Now Jenn enough is enough just who is he
you keep teasing me and wont tell me
this is too touching to be imagination
ooooooooooooh
loves Mia
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