These words may seem simple
but the message is distinct,
as I express what I am feeling
to share that in which I think.
I hope for a connection
between two souls unknown,
in search for a humanity
from which we were grown.
So, please lead by example
and help spread the light,
let's voice our opinions
and reclaim what is right.
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Written August 7th, 2005
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Hi Cuzz
good poem...glad to see your still writing.
The only problem I have with your poem is that it's kinda short. You have four line stanzas with only three parts. I think you should write another four line stanza. This will even out the poem and and give it some structure.
Of course this is only my voiced opinion.
Keep writing and I hope to hear from you soon.
Bill
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