Did you like it
Did you like staring up at your own friend
As I stood over you, after I beat you down
The blood rushing down your face
Your arm completely bent in the wrong direction
You coming in and out of consciousness
Why, why would your friend do this
After all, we are friends
Didn't you know, I have no tolerance for somebody who turns on me
Did you find good conversation with those people
How about that brunette in the tight jeans in the group
Did you enjoy telling them my problems, wasn't it nice
As you guys laughed, and talked, all about me
All my girlfriend's problems, all my problems, my life now
Oh, I'm sorry, did you not realize I could hear you
Did you not realize I would beat the fuck out of you
Did you not realize I would beat you so bad
Did you not realize I would do it with out hesitation
Yeah asshole, laugh now, as you sit in a hospital
Give that brunette a call, girls love a guy in a cast right?
Call all of them, one more thing to make fun of me for
"Oh, he is such an asshole, he can't take a joke"
PLEASE recover fast, PLEASE come after me, PLEASE give me an excuse
Author notes
At a party this weekend, my friend, a good friend I have known for years was talking shit about me non-stop, to these complete strangers, he crossed the line when he said something bad about my ex-girlfriend, I lost control and beat him up, but I am not a violent guy though
Written August 7th, 2005
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nice...
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usually neadnerthals such as thevoice in this poem, usually cant express themselves through words. this is living proof I guess. I enjoyed the flow and the angst, but anger management might be the next thing to write about. agression is so passe'
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I like it! :-D Alot. hehe. Makes me wanna beat the hell outta the people that talk about me and my people! haha. well. That was a good peom. -
this is well written with plent of pain and anger! i love it! it doesnt matter wether you are violent or not...sometimes we all get pushed to places we never thought that we would be. ive done the same thing to a chick that was hanging all over my boyfriend,,,she doesnt like me very much anymore...but the messed up thing was that it was a situation close enough to yours...the chick was my best friend...i had warned her to stay away from him...to leave him alone...but she was always all over him...so one night..she tried to kiss him, and well you get the idea
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haha, i love it!! i really hate to hear this... but i loved the way you expressed your feelings! haha... if that makes sense?
anyways... im sorry you had to feel this and i know what it feels like to a certain extent... but you should've kicked his ass even worse for bringing your gf into it all... i hate when people bring other peoples people into shit... if that makes any sense at all!!! hope so! well yeah... nice way to express yourself! i like the background you chose too!
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holy shit...the things I could say about backstabbers...I hear ya on this. you should've beat that fucker up, man. he deserved it. that's what I woulda done. anyways awesome poem, the description was excellent. keep writing and watch out for those bastards who'll turn on you. ::cringes as she remembers previous backstabbers::
okay that's enough rambling. talk to ya later.
MORSMORDRE!
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Hey, what's up? Nice poem, it was funny but it sucks that if this is real, your friend would actually do this! I've had the same thing happen to me, I mean, one thing if they tell a close freind and then introduce you to and you become friends. But if he goes and tells a group of people you don't even know and make fun of any problems you have then that's something different. You know what? I'm sorry I keep on talking...I'll shut up now. But good for you! Go beat the shit out of him again! P.S. My AP name is'nt Lenor anymore, it's Valentina, my other name...
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I'm glad ur not violent, or else u might end up n jail.. But its good to get anger out in poems like these.. Just make sure it stays on paper and in ur head and doesnt become an action u take.. Sorry to hear ur old friend turned out to be such a jerk... I know it sucks when u think u can trust someone and they end up being horrible... Well, keep writing and venting ur anger...
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may i please rip their heads off?
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