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Suicide Intent

I just want to cut the hurt away
Watch it come out with the blood
That reddens the floor where I lay.
Slicing deep to forget the past
Clinging onto the blade
Someone save me, I'm going fast
Popping pills & doing shit to be high
Alone... I am just so alone
Laughing, sobbing, screaming, I cry
Getting ready to hop the ledge
Pull me back, restrain me
Dull the knife's blooded edge.

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Suicide poem from a while back... ((GL readers: i have 2 parts written, just need to post them))
Written August 7th, 2005

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  • leos-gurl143
    August 7, 2005
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    i can relate to these words completly. at one point in my life, i felt exactly this way. there is always a light at the end of the tunnel, and you must always have hope. i dont know if this was written about your personal experiences, but keep on writing.

    Molly