wanna be invisible
nobody but me
its the only way
that I can be free
In a crowd full of people
I stare into space
the people around notice the blanknes on my face
wanna be alone where nobosy else can see
and nobody can contact me
need to cry for a while
rite now theres no way im gonna smile
im drowning in pain, in shame and denile
thats why i wanna be alone for a while
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Written August 7th, 2005
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Hey Babes xxx
hi nalice lol. amazine poem. yeh i know dat feeling where u wanna be alone its wierd but in time ull prob get over it and feel better for having that time and just being able to sort out your feelings and thoughts. i had that this time last year with you know who. although im sure your feelings and reason/s are different from mine. but if u wanna talk about it then you know where i am and if u just wanna av a laugh n forget about it then i can be here 4 that too, watever u want i can try and help hun. hope you feel better soon and try not to get stressed out about it or watever its to do wiv. just chill for a bit and do wat u feel is right. follow ur heart in a way i guess do wat u feel. its probably the best and dont try and change yourself for other people as it wouldnt be the real you. your great just the way you are, everyone loves ya. hope you feel better soon. luvs ya babes. Jules xxx -
U ok?
I love how the rhyme works in this - its really effective having a simple rhyme. Very cool poem.
If u feel bad, u can always talk to me. And yes, I know I'm a hypocrite
Have a great sumer
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