Waiting

waiting...

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Sorry melissa,this is all I could think off..shortest poem rather word i guess..
Love your contests tho'.

Love,
Pisces.
Written August 7th, 2005

Contest: SHORT PIECES by Melissa Gayle. 300 points, ended August 11, 2005, 13 entries
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Congruence
September 29, 2005
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hmmmm
Melissa Gayle
August 10, 2005
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Aren't we all...
Taranand
August 9, 2005
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I really like the way it trailed off......suggesting endless
waiting...endless longing. I hope the reward for your patient wait will be everything you're longing for.
Peace and joy Tara
windhover3
August 7, 2005
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I got a note from someone by email recently suggesting that one word couldn't be a poem. I disagreed, and thought of "doom"... just the round sound tolling the end. Waiting works as well. It extends outward, suggesting and calling for reply.
Imokon
August 7, 2005
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aw honey! hugs

"praying..."
transcendental baby
August 7, 2005
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One word can be powerful ... I'm getting so many good ideas from you Pi ... thanks