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Words are water (Dr P)





Your words are my water
Helping me grow
Keeping me hydrated
Keeping me healthy
Keeping me sane

Your words are my heart
Helping me stay alive
Keeping it beating
Keeping it steady
Keeping it happy
Keeping it constant flow

Your words are my energy
Helping me stay awake
Keeping me motivated
Keeping me alert
Keeping me at attention

I just thought you should know


Take your words away
And I am nothing
nothing in this world of hate and pain
All the things corrupting this earth
this sad plane
This unbeatable unstoppable emptying life we know
Keep your words with me
Keep them here
And be proud to let your mind and feelings show






Author notes

For my bestes Dr P
leave and you die a slow tourcherous death
Punk ass
Written August 7th, 2005

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  • robert bolin
    August 8, 2005
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    This is a very beautiful rite truely the heart and soul of vini at her best - you truely painted a fabulous picture and the power of your heart and soul are awsome very breath taking and sweet not trying to cross boundaries but you have the prettiest words for putting a poem together and your love for poetry just keeps shining through..smiles and apluads rob..


  • sky black
    August 7, 2005
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    well keep away from me when im driving then, we all know i wont be safe behind that wheel, pah! anyway, nice one mom this is so cute, and im glad you managed to make him stay, i feel useless for doing nothing though...glad you're mom magic worked, anyway, l8az love ur baby girl sky xxxx

  • Dr P
    August 7, 2005
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    Thnx hun, i aint goin anywhere ness i get hit by a bus thn i be goin nowere at all spk soon
    HNB
    Rae V

  • nolonger
    August 7, 2005
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    Oh yeah Tinker See i was confused by your signing off with Tink slaps head
    Ok,Thank you Tinker
    I do love to nick people

  • Ms Tinkerbell
    August 7, 2005
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    No I do use the name Tink anyway (Tinkerbell is a mouthful!!).... thought id signed off with Tink before with you but I guess not...You called me Tinker ealier which I preferred LOL Thank you so much for your applause my sweet

  • nolonger
    August 7, 2005
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    Thank you so very much Tink for the wonderful comment, I see you like the nick name I gave you or have you used it before
    in anycase I feel worde are one of the most important things we have.we have to be able to express our selvs or oiur emotions never get herd.. or even felt by others. Thank you hun
    always
    ~ vini ~

  • Ms Tinkerbell
    August 7, 2005
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    This was great .... made me think of all the comments we post on AP, all the words we use for encouragement and to help ppl better themselves. My words will never cease, I talk the hind legs off a donkey so there, hehe Anyways back to your poem, loved the flow of this and you always write with such conviction. I loved 'I just thought you should know' something just made me think about that one line...we should all be more honest at telling ppl what we want and how we feel. This is pure brilliance. Once again you have brought me to life with you words. Love Tink x

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