50 years is not a joke,
Staying together living together is a special glow.
As lived together,
There is a Natural hope for the other.
I saw you since I was born,
Such "PRECIOUS" Grandparents has no one got.
I grew up and saw a blow,
So fascinating was the show.
You got 4 children,
But the expression on your face meant that your still a child.
Nana! You went all over the places,
But you never looked as tired as the others.
Because of you'll I got such a pretty Mother,
And you'll got a pretty GRAND-DAUGHTER!
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Written August 7th, 2005
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WOW!
WOW!! If I remember.. didn't you get a bronze trophy for this? Oh Yea.. you did!
But it is worth a GOLD TROPHY! 
It's just AMAZING, CUTE, EXCELLENT, PRETTY, FANTASTIC and see.. I have no more words for it!! I LOVED IT! And these lines are the BEST!!-
Because of you'll I got such a pretty Mother,
And you'll got a pretty GRAND-DAUGHTER!
Well, it's true! Loveee you loads!
Nida -
This is cute (my g-parents just celebrated their 60th) and I love that you think so highly of them. There are some funky things going on in here grammatically and I'm a bit of a grammar nazi, so this throws me for a loop. My advice would be to read through it and fix anything that you catch. It's wonderful. Much Love.
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firsty congrats to ur grandparents on their 50 th anniversary! its really nice cos my both of the side grandparents couldnt make it to 50 since one of them died! Congrats to them!
About the poem , I really like it !its simplicty mixed with raw emotions! A very beautiful poem by a sweet gurl ! thanks for sharing and keep it up!
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All the best for your Grand parents. I wish they have many many many more wedding anniversaries. Grandparents are real great people. I love mine a huge lot. I have spent all my life with them.
This poem shows how much you care for them. God bless you child.
Love
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Very nice! Congratulations to your grandparents on their anniversary. Are they planning on celebrating it? If so I hope they have a good time. I'm sure they love you for writing this poem for them. I know I would. Thanks for sharing this and it's great to read something new from you. Haven't heard from you in a while. God bless!
Brian
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