The brightest of white,
With roses of red.
Scatter around me,
And lace my head.
A smile so innocent,
A touch so kind,
He caressed my skin,
Made my heart unwind.
The scenery so intense,
Like his illuminating eyes.
A field of the rarest flowers,
Awakening under moon rise.
I, lost in its beauty,
Breathed in the pure air.
He, lost in my beauty,
Tried not to stare.
Gently the leaves stirred,
As so our hearts did.
While our eyes made conversation,
I felt so much like a kid.
His arms held wide,
I began to close in.
I could smell the sweet flowers,
As he kissed my skin.
Where he came from,
I may never know.
But his kiss,
Will never go.
A love so pure,
Can never fade.
But a love unwilling,
Will be betrayed.
The night harmonious with moon,
The day shared by sun.
My hand conjoined to his,
And together we are one.
Author notes
Option number 7
True Love
A contest entry
- Love by xCrystalxFate.
300 points, ended September 22, 2005, 26 entries
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450 points, ended September 7, 2007, 63 entries
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This is SO beautiful. I love true love poems such as this one because they are not forced, they're real and bursting with feelings and emotions. I loved the lines "Gently the leaves stirred,
As so our hearts did.
While our eyes made conversation,
I felt so much like a kid." Thanks for entering and best of luck in my contest
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heart warming
i love your poetry the stanzas and the rhyming are what catches my attention and make me read more.......thouroughly.
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very well written
What a beautiful poem. You are a very talented writer. I enjoyed reading this. Your use of words to show images is very well done. I almost felt like I was there.
etherealforu
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very sweet. nice too. good flow to it overall. love the title. nice job with writing this. enjoyed the read. was worth the read.
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A very interesting poem. I could just about see it in my head. I thought it to be a good write. Thanks for sharing.
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thankx so much
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Good write!
wow!!!!!!!!!!
Hmmmm!!!!
This is sooooooo good!
Where he came from
I may never know
But his kiss
Will never go
This is so interesting. It emphasizes the poem in general.
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This is a great poem! I totally love the title, the way you combined roses and love. Great write, keep it up!
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Wow....
.... This is one of the best poems that I have ever read. Its so descriptive. Its not too long or too short. Its beautiful. I loved the part about the flowers being awakened by the night. This was so beautiful keep wrighting
Love always
{K}itty
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