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Arms Sleeved With Stitches and Stardust

Life is unfair
I learned that the hard way
But I mean everything to no one
And something to someone
Never knew what happened
Never saw it coming
Felt it all in the end
The full effect of your mistakes
They come full circle don’t they
Haunt you once again
Poison the water as I poison myself
Eat your own fucking fantasy
As I vie nightly in mine to live in a world that is dead
Keep telling me there's a reason to live
I can't see with the stardust in my eyes.

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Just a little something...
Written July 30th, 2005

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  • sadhe
    August 9, 2005
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    Yes..yes yes "let;s kill each other.."
    Sorry as I toll you anger control me now...so please sorry but, good poem...as always


  • -throw it up
    August 9, 2005
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    Me likey this

  • Elithial
    August 9, 2005
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    Hmm... I liked this, it had a twist of emotions, kind of went from sad, to anger, like peoples emotiones-very unique. I LOVED the way you ended it with "I cant see weith stardust in my eyes." I dont think there was a better way to end it. The title grabs your attentions. Great job

    Later Days<3

    btw, Evanescence is amazing.