Not again
It’s over now
She’s gone again
And this I vow
I will not budge
Or take her back
She’s no respect
And that’s a fact
I took her in
And cared for her
Thought she was mine
Only defer
For her to use and swindle me
Thought we had bond to strong degree
But that’s okay
Don’t dare come back!
You’ve deceived me
You stupid cat.
Author notes
Oasis Rock Contest. I saw this contest and decided to write something funny. I don't know if other people will find it humorous but I thought it was clever. Hope you Like!
Written August 6th, 2005
A contest entry
- Something that will move me by Oasis Rock.
300 points, ended August 12, 2005, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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hahahaha great twist dude
was not expectign that awesome / clever call it what you like 
thanks for entering and good luck!!
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Thank you starhiker, really appreciate it
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Hah! Hillarious!
Hah! I really thought you were talking about a deceitful woman, until the very last line. A cat! I would have never guessed it if you had omitted that line... Really hope it wins the contest! -
Lol. This was very clever. I had no idea you were talking about a cat until the end. I really enjoyed this. Keep up the great work. Thanks for the comment on my poem "Scandalous Friendship," I'm glad that you enjoyed it and I'm glad I wrote something you can relate to. Again, great job.
<3 Kylie
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