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My Fire

you make me feel so wonderful
just your words
just your care
I can't describe it
I know once again why I love you...

...thank you

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Written December 30th, 2002

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  • Broken Dreams
    January 19, 2003
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    don't touch it!

    Know the feelings here. Beautiful write :)


  • Cisco Kid
    January 2, 2003
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    neutral

    This is well written but a little bland for my tastes.

  • fallenmuse
    December 31, 2002
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    this one is for my Pheonyx too... ;)

  • SafeHaven
    December 30, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    understandable. a very 'lovely tribute' indeed.
    ~J~

  • bratessoffire
    December 30, 2002
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    excellent

    Beautiful poem! Lovely tribute. *Jamie*

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