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Live For Eternity

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Everything has a beginning
inevitably they come to an end
a love song two lovers are singing
when one can no longer pretend

On the road we travel through life
starting out so much is unknown
along the way we do  cause strife
but in the end we all must atone

The beginning of life inside you
so precious this little girl or boy
waiting the nine months through
at the ending your bundle of joy

Storms begin with a rumbling sound
then the gusty wind starts to blow
raindrops splatter hitting the ground
ending with sunshine or a rainbow

A book begins with an introduction
the story may lead your mind astray
with visions of love and seduction
in the end  these thoughts fade away

one thing never ends but last forever
that is eternal life with Jesus Christ
once accepted He shall leave you never
eternity is your reward for His sacrifice



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Written August 6th, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    August 8, 2005
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    WONDERFUL

    oh Josh, thank you as always your comments leave me wirth a smile. God Bless you. Sandy

  • josh-13
    August 6, 2005
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    A book begins with an introduction
    the story may lead your mind astray
    with visions of love and seduction
    in the end these thoughts fade away

    one thing never ends but last forever
    that is eternal life with Jesus Christ
    once accepted He shall leave you never
    eternity is your reward for His sacrifice

    God is everything, the one thing that doesnt fade away. I loved it, and I loved the tittle, It reminds me of someone.

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 6, 2005
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    Thank you so much Don. It is always a pleasure to read your comments. Take care and God Bless you, Sandy Take care, and God Bless you. Sandy

  • Donjo1030
    August 6, 2005
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    excellent

    Another beautiful write.
    Your flow in this poem is exquisite and rhyme really well. I understood it as at the end of nine months you have a bundle of joy. I could wrong. Praise God for another wonderful poem. BRAVO!!!!!!!
  • Linda Sue silver member
    August 6, 2005
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    Hi Sis This is kind of sad but it is a great poem...nice rhyme and flow. I have to disagree with one of your stanzas. A "Bundle of Joy" is more a beginning than it is an end. And for most mothers, that bundle of joy will be in their hearts and minds forever. Linny
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