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Jasmin and Jade/Acrostic

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Jasmin is my oldest Grandaughter that I love dearly
Aunty to her Brother Jasons' son Jackson.
Sweetest young lady with a tender heart and loving soul
Means the world to her partner Cameron, they adore each other.
I miss her, I wish she did'nt live so far away from me;
Never is she very far from my heart though.

Although I have five Grandsons and a great grandson,
Nothing is like the feeling of having Grandaughters.
Delightful Daughters of my Son Michael and Daughter Sharon.

Jade is the cutest little girl who has just turned nine
Already she chooses the type of clothes she wants to wear.
Devoted to her family and friends, I love her so much,
Every time she visits I always get a big hug off her and Justin.

Author notes

My Two Grand daughters mean the world to me, jasmin on the right is a very special Lady who has a big heart, she will turn 22 on Sept 12th. Only thing is she lives too far from us, but she rings often.
Jade on the left is my Son Michaels daughter, she a little cutie who has just turned 9 on June 16th, she already nearly as tall as me. I love them both dearly, just as I love my Grandsons, but Girls are somehow special.
angelica
Written August 6th, 2005

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  • iamfromabove
    August 8, 2005
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    Cool Congrats you deserved it
    Luvs Mia


  • angelica silver member
    August 8, 2005
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    Thank you Mia, I got a Bronze Trophy for it

    Hugs AJ

  • iamfromabove
    August 8, 2005
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    A beautiful write for two really sweet girls. And I know they love you dearly as well.
    Best of luck in the contest
    Mia


  • insecure princess
    August 7, 2005
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    Ooooh how sweet! They are very beautiful children, for a beautiful grandmother! Good Write AJ, all my love, Jade xx


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    August 7, 2005
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    OMG they are adorable! I love this piece. It makes me feel closer to you by giving a glimpse into the loves within your life and your treasures. Gorgeous write Joan, full of you...full of love. Blessings and hugs, Gypsy

  • angelica silver member
    August 6, 2005
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    darling Pixie, they are my pride and Joy, I'm hoping my new Great grandchild due in December will be a girl, but if it's another Boy, I will love him just as much. Thank you dear Pixie for your comment.
    Love AAAJ Hug*


  • SEA angel gold member
    August 6, 2005
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    Excellent and Cute Acrostic

    Boy does this bring back memories. I could remember being this young in an instant and it was so liberating. It seems like you leave a few angels on each of the pieces you write and these two we can see. Thank You for my Smile right now
    Edited on Aug 06, 1:59 p.m. because ''.


  • True Love Gal
    August 6, 2005
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    This poem was very heartwarming I enjoyed it very much. Thanks, so much for entering my contest and the best of luck to you...

    Jenn


  • ceegeeess
    August 6, 2005
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    flowers in the garden!

    it is lively and heartwarming that you have introduced two colorful flowers from your family garden!"but Girls are somehow special" wow! I also do feel like that. Girls are like flowers in love whereas boys are roccketlike !Jasmin is really a jasmin and jade makes me feel that she is Joan while a child!Thanks for the introduction of your loving grandchildren dear Joan!


  • hugh wyles silver member
    August 6, 2005
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    Dear Bea,
    You are fortunate in your grandchildren and this is a lovely photo of two of them. I know their Nana just adores them and it's maybe a good job they live far away from you or they'd be spoiled rotten!!
    It's a lovely acrostic that you've written and I won't breathe a word about it being a non-rhyming one. Applause.
    Good luck in the contest.
    And you've had your quota of comments from me for today. Come back tomorrow 'coz the comment counter is closed for the night!
    Love and hugs, XXX Hugh..

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