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Empty Nonsense

Alone I lay
upon my bed
empty nonsense
fills my head

I can't sleep
I'm scared to death
my life is changing
I can't catch my breath

What should I do?
what can I say?
I lost control already
I don't want it to end this way

My mind is full of nonsense
I don't know what to do
I'm lost in my reality
lost without any sort of clue

Won't someone help me?
Isn't anyone there?
please don't abandon me
someone say you care

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Written August 5th, 2005

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  • I Need My Love
    October 7, 2006
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    i hate when my head is full of ninsense i havent been on this sight forever and i see you havent either i havent been writing anything lately for about a year now but i really want to get started again well girl i love you and miss you talkk to you when you get back from your vacation love ya

  • MoNiK
    August 6, 2005
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    Nice poem...the mood not all that great...stay up and you will see that things will get better with time...=D...