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A walk to remember

finding peace amidst confusion
   finding a smile amongst tears

As I feel the tender wisps
  of the wind
I can feel wonders
  I can feel compassion
I can feel life
  I can feel love

I feel you
  you are my love
living and breathing
  within me...


our love is like
   the wind,
I can't see it
 but I can feel it...


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Inspired by the movie. A movie which surpassed all the cliches found in a usual teen movie.
A movie which broke me down...and awakened the faith within me.
Written August 5th, 2005

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  • thick-chick8000
    October 31, 2005
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    I LOVE THIS!!

    I LOVE THIS!!!


  • transcendental baby gold member
    August 6, 2005
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    There you go ...


  • Taranand
    August 6, 2005
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    A beautiful feelingfull poem. I haven't seen the movie but will keep my eye out for it now. Its wonderful when we find those special gifts for us in life that move and transform us.
    Then to inspire a poem as well.. thats like two gifts in one.
    Very inspiring, Peace and joy Tara

  • JessAmerica
    August 5, 2005
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    This is how I feel in my life right now. It is a feeling that words sometimes can't describe, and when it can be, it is as beautiful as this. You have done a great job with this. It's one of those that wil stay with me for a long time. Thank you for sharing this.