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open arms

open your arms, open your heart
let my love come to you
with total acceptance from the start
we'll build a world ,just us two.

what can come between the two of us?
where can there be any harm?
unbridled love shall renew of us
when we are in open arms.

let all the world in it's madness
swallow itself in it's hate
we'll have no sorrow or sadness
open arms will a new hope create

we will brave, and suffer and weather
our hearts to each other shall bind
at the end of our lives together
open arms in heaven we'll find.

Author notes

"open Arms" was Journey's greatest hit and the biggest chart-topper for 1981. it was featured on the soundtrack of "Heavy metal"
Written August 5th, 2005

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  • SexyLilFiend
    August 9, 2005
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    Great

    Very Nice.. i like this alot, it seems like i been waiting for a love like that, still lookin but hopeful. .. I loved the wording and the way it made me feel.. Keep Writing, your very talented.